Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Foxing Box -Chapter 2- Seperation

-Chapter 2-

Separation

 
 
 
    Fox had been living with the officer for quite a while now. They treated each other like they were their own kin. But Fox had his first mission, which meant he had to leave. His mission was to go kill a messenger bird that was going to The Hawk's Nest. His objective was to go to one the pigeons checkpoints which was a place to eat and rest. Fox had to leave officer, he was miserable, but he did not show it. The officer was the only one who actually knew and understood Fox. But unfortunately the two had to part ways.
   On the plane ride to Italy, Fox was the only one on the plane besides the pilot. He sat there in sorrow, only thinking of how caring and understanding the officer was towards him. Fox had never felt taken care of before he met the officer. He arrived in Italy. He was heading towards the checkpoint, when all of a sudden a small mouse, runs up to Fox and asked what he was doing here. He didn't know, so he pointed to a random bird in the sky, and showed the mouse he needed to kill it. She somehow instantly understood, she was part of an assassination. She told Fox to follower her, so he did. They got to the checkpoint in a timely manner. They waited for the pigeon for four hours. They finally saw the pigeon from a distance. Fox suddenly leaped to the highest building, and pounced on the pigeon. He brought it down to the floor, and bit his teeth into the pigeon's neck. Fox felt accomplished, his first mission was a success. On the other hand the little mouse, was terrified. She was hiding behind a small brick, but deep down she knew he was not going to hurt her. 
 
   

5 comments:

  1. Is the officer human, or is it fox? What gender is it? How did it communicate to Fox in the first chapter? The officer character needs to be fleshed out!

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  2. Liam, the officer is a fox, he is a man, and he didn't.

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  3. Interesting blog. I'm not as confused as I was before. Message from a person. "Update or they will hurt you!!!" I was forced to say that...

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  4. This story is the bomb diggity. I can't wait for more wonderful chapters! Fox is my new spirit animal.

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